obviouslytormented

Daydreamer, daydreamer

by obviouslytormented, Apr 05 2008, 07:27 PM in dreams, have, what, you,

It's pretty straightforward, lads and ladies. But, hey, please, I encourage your own interpretations. I eagerly await your commentary. Copyright me, obviouslytormented[hah], 2008. just, you know, in case.

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maxie01

Written Apr 24 2008, 08:49 PM

that seems deep. I liked it, nice structure of your stanzas in the poem.

The Destroyer of Worlds

oderwg

Written Apr 05 2008, 07:31 PM

Awesome, what a way to start your first day at deliric. I'll leave the deep insightful commentary to other users who are more qualified than I.