The Prisoners

by dylan, Feb 19 2006, 10:09 AM in life, poetry,

A sort of longing

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desolation_row

Written Mar 04 2006, 09:08 PM

Excellent. Love the imagery. You are a very good writer I think. Can you do me a favor and critique my only poem?

dolinski

Written Mar 01 2006, 08:41 AM

Intriguing picture. I like it.

missbow

Written Feb 28 2006, 05:21 PM

this is amazing. i adore the imagery.

divinepoet

Written Feb 26 2006, 10:45 PM

Simply excellant.I really love it.

topguy

Written Feb 20 2006, 07:51 PM

smooth choice of words....verses are adorned with emotion and yet fashioned out of creativity.

el_scripto

Written Feb 20 2006, 06:14 PM

Strange, intense, deep and thought-provoking, not to mention (like many others have mentionned before me) amazing imagery. Amazing write. Take care.

grandpacal

Written Feb 20 2006, 03:24 AM

I just can't figure out what is going on.

ariaof_ishmael

Written Feb 20 2006, 02:12 AM

beautiful, and definitely amazing imagery...

terrd7

Written Feb 19 2006, 05:43 PM

This an excellent poem ...loved it! '...dull metal morning' ...great stuff

orolon

Written Feb 19 2006, 11:39 AM

An amazing poem -- the way it flows, from self to surroundings to the other (photo), and how love lost leaves desolation. Great, great piece.