orolon

Mixture

by orolon, Feb 19 2006, 12:16 PM in anger, loss, pain,

A creative free write based on a single and singular word.

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Lee

icegrl

Written Apr 30 2006, 02:24 PM

very creative and expressive, i like it

Jackson

missbow

Written Mar 24 2006, 06:14 AM

'A mixture of air and fire Filling up your nostrils like a hammer blast.' i really like those lines.

Driscoll

terrd7

Written Feb 19 2006, 06:05 PM

Sounds like a song about insignificance versus priority ...Liked it a lot ...nice and jumpy.

Gold

shoie

Written Feb 19 2006, 05:10 PM

what a gurrrl. fred

Tait

thefixion

Written Feb 19 2006, 04:16 PM

Interesting piece. I can't say its my favourite of yours. But i definitely thought about it. In the end, it was more simple than complex, as i thought it would be in the first place. You seem like a very insightful person.

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ahshadowrai

Written Feb 19 2006, 02:48 PM

Well done, absence of light, so dark the rage can be..........Great write.......

RT

el_scripto

Written Feb 19 2006, 12:18 PM

Very descriptive...I don't understand one part though...You went about describing color, but then after that...you said there was an absence of light, or something. That part just kinda of confused me, but overall, I really liked this piece. It was full of great imagery.