mikemartin_lfs

Theres no "what if"

My way of saying there should be no "what if's" in life; you live, learn, move on... there should be no "what ifs" when things happen, only "what now"

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maggie_grace

Written Jan 09 2011, 04:08 PM

This is my favorite poem of all that I've read, so far

 HitorMiss

jcashmon5294

Written Jul 08 2010, 11:50 AM

Thanks..you just gave me another concept I need to get in my head for the rest of my life

 N

miki_luvs_poetry

Written Jun 08 2010, 06:46 PM

So deep, so true, loved it!!!!! Even though I say "what if" all the time it's still really good!

 bunag

crimsonwine

Written Jun 04 2010, 03:52 AM

what re you thinking when you made it? it seemed so deep. i like it though:))

 wizner

marissa17

Written May 26 2010, 02:04 PM

i love this ur good and i love the rime sceem but wat if the ??? isent wat at all wat if its when? thats the ??? i stik to wats the pont of knowing wat u will do if u dont know when to do it? the poem was graet keep righting

 Gallardo

chiyan

Written Apr 14 2010, 05:38 AM

It is very inspirational,too bad I always ask myself "What If"
But I'll try to change it

 Frazier

genexi

Written Mar 02 2010, 12:28 PM

so very true my friend

 king

baphomet

Written Feb 16 2010, 12:22 PM

"what if" moments are a lot more important then now, given circumstances, "what now" is the better choice. But "what if" means so much more then i feel like you portrayed. Expansion of thought is important, and i hope i'm not offending, but sometimes a "what now" won't suffice. sadness and loneliness are different then suffering, different then desperation. But, the beauty of it is it's an opinion. Life doesn't have an answer, their are no right or wrongs, just perception.

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truelovewaits

Written Feb 11 2010, 12:06 AM

so true....loved it adding it to favorites

 Leigh

xxmusiccrazyxx

Written Feb 09 2010, 01:23 PM

~Fight for all of this?
Actually give it a shot?
No...if you're truly ready,
I suppose I should not.~

this was my favorite part :D

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