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This is the first time I've written something like... erm, this. To those of you who know me IRL, it's not what you think! In light of this, a small warning ( which I'm sure you'll all ignore ) : adult themes.
This is the first time I've written something like... erm, this. To those of you who know me IRL, it's not what you think! In light of this, a small warning ( which I'm sure you'll all ignore ) : adult themes.
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I'm not sure but I think you meant this to be slightly commical. I loved it!
It was a vivid image of those dreams that you can have that make no sence.
And the centipedes, with the people holding their breaths and closing their eyes?
WONDEFUL becuase thats what people are like. They see what they want to see. Not the real immage.
This really was a good piece. Do you write stories more than poetry?
But yeah, I'm running out of words to say how much i liked this.
Keep it up!
bittersweet
That was interesting.
Interesting in a good way.
I liked that part about the dream...
And how it was real in a not so very real kind of way.