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I liked this, the imagery was really interesting. Was it the feeling of just wanting to be left alone, while being happy? Or was it being happy but wanting to enjoy silence? Am I not even close? And there's that water again!
Very good! I liked this one and it flowed nicely.
That was smooooooth! There wasn't a rough spot, word, or flow in the entire piece. It made me smile and want to go back to bed. -Chicory
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I liked this, the imagery was really interesting. Was it the feeling of just wanting to be left alone, while being happy? Or was it being happy but wanting to enjoy silence? Am I not even close?
And there's that water again!