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thelastkotani
Written Dec 26 2010, 11:49 PM
Tis a choice but non-the-less two choices i think the best, great poem and not confusing to me.
chiyan
Written Apr 14 2010, 05:50 AM
Nice work there
It inspires a lot of people losin' faith(I only hope i'm not one of them)
baphomet
Written Feb 16 2010, 11:20 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed this. It's simplicity is what makes it so powerful. I get a sense of connection to this too, faith can by very symbolic. I think you may enjoy the only thing i've ever done hahaha. tell me what you think if you get the chance.
thegurl101
Written Jan 28 2009, 07:15 PM
Oh geez.
I forgot how amazing of a writer you are.
This was really great.
I don't really think that I took it the way other people did,
but maybe I was just concentrating on how well it was written.
frezbo
Written Jan 26 2009, 05:51 PM
I thought I'd get comments about religion, but thank you all very much for them all the same. This isn't about having faith in a God, but a person. I guess that isn't very obvious though, and you can read it any way you like. No - I don't think I've heard of Anis Mojgani, who is that? I don't remember using bric-a-brac much before, but I probably did at least once :P
liiberar
Written Jan 26 2009, 05:39 PM
I could swear I remember you using "bric-a-brac" quite often... perhaps before the crash? Anyways, this poem made me start think of a bunch of things ( maybe I'm still tired )... have you heard of Anis Mojgani?
gingerdave
Beautifully constructed. Clever and concise.