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laurallamalover
Written Feb 27 2006, 08:56 PM
sad and true... you bring to our eyes what we didn't before see.
kingu
Written Feb 26 2006, 06:34 AM
This was really well written. I liked your use of rhyme and rhythm. This story is written from a very perceptive point of view, a somewhat refreshing point of view. A very good effort.
lemon
Written Feb 22 2006, 09:53 PM
I love the refreshing change in perspective. You have molded the truth into an amazing and eye opening work of art.
el_scripto
Written Feb 22 2006, 02:15 AM
Wow, I really like the message you're sending out in this. And it's so true too! Society looks down on whores and prostitutes, never bothering to think what goes on inside their minds and hearts. Reminds me of my piece called 'goodbye'. Take care!
cre8iveone
Written Feb 20 2006, 01:13 PM
A very sad poem...yet, very true. It exposes a lot of emotions and is very well written. I really liked it!
born2read
a great message is spoken through this peice, really great job!