When your all I think about

by stargazer93, May 23 2009, 09:18 AM in heartbreak, sad,

Im new to this feeling=( unfortunately..... this is what I came up with...

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snjones30

Written Jul 13 2011, 11:31 PM

This is really good! and I can totally relate!

babocka24

Written Jan 20 2011, 08:18 PM

Totally alot of people can relate. I knw I can relate.

brokenhearts102

Written Dec 10 2010, 10:32 PM

i like it alot is has good wording but could use some tweeking (idk how to spell lol) so yes but over all good emotion. i can relate!!!

myboyfriendspoems

Written Aug 12 2010, 03:49 PM

AMAZING!!

erinheartspoems

Written Jul 08 2010, 04:07 PM

I feel for you... ik the feeling (ikikik I'm 12 almost 13 but when I got dumped... ouch) Hope you feel better knowing your poems on the popular list and tons of ppl (including me) think its great! :)

marissa17

Written May 30 2010, 06:43 PM

it's not that powedic but its good and i can realat to it alot

chiyan

Written Apr 15 2010, 06:36 AM

like this literary piece especially the beginning

sunnymcnair

Written Feb 28 2010, 05:24 PM

"When You're All I Think About"

hardyparkerson

Written Feb 27 2010, 11:46 PM

You need to edit this. It's "...when you're all I think about...."

xxmusiccrazyxx

Written Nov 14 2009, 07:19 PM

sorry about this :( its a sucky feeling but its good