it is the truth.. personaly ive grown to resent the word for just these reasons. strong message and put to a very strong if not angry tone. good job.
it seemed more like a lecture than a peom to me, but then i dont get out much.. my knowlage of poetic writting is limited.
*claps* AMAZING! i love this so much you have no idea. ADDING TO MY FAVORITES. everything is very true about it. keep writing. check out my work. thankss =]
crimson76
it is the truth.. personaly ive grown to resent the word for just these reasons. strong message and put to a very strong if not angry tone. good job.
it seemed more like a lecture than a peom to me, but then i dont get out much.. my knowlage of poetic writting is limited.