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serephinex
Written Jul 10 2009, 10:42 PM
Everytime I read one of your pieces, I know i'm going to be impressed.
However, I was even more so than usual (Which is definately saying something.) with this piece.
You've easily demonstrated how you can transfer your thoughts into literature (overall, and especially in this piece.) and you make it look so -easy-.
One can easily relate to almost everything you write, yet at the same time, you put your own original twist to it all, making it different.
Very well done.
beast_of_burden
Written Jul 10 2009, 12:33 AM
Hae, I really liked this. In my mind,I can relate it to people I have and still deniably love. and its nice to be able to do so.
nathan_nonsense
i love it! so plain and simple, yet so professionally worded. i loved how basic you wrote this, but at the same time, you still added that artistic, almost flowery language that really draws me in with poetry. the title must be the key to this poem. i'm finding myself leaning towards the idea that this friend of yours is Youth?