diffinitly not what i expected when i read the title or the first line.. i like the first few stanzas. the rest not so much, but i that may have been my own bias rather than true dislike of how it was written or the topic. parts of it mereley remind me of someone i am rather unhappy with. but again i really do like the first few stanzas as well as some other lines... grr i wish we could view the works as we make comments so i could be more spesific =P
crimson76
diffinitly not what i expected when i read the title or the first line.. i like the first few stanzas. the rest not so much, but i that may have been my own bias rather than true dislike of how it was written or the topic. parts of it mereley remind me of someone i am rather unhappy with. but again i really do like the first few stanzas as well as some other lines... grr i wish we could view the works as we make comments so i could be more spesific =P