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beast_of_burden
Written Jul 27 2009, 01:48 AM
Hae, I really enjoyed reading this, its as if photos are just another mask that we wear, I know what its like to wear a mask. I also really like title; Its a pretty cool poem overall. Im putting it in my Favourites, hope that means something.
potentialthreat
Written Jul 27 2009, 12:30 AM
The whole thing is awsome!! This reminds me of my grandparents(?)
going in my favs
so_unique
Written Jul 26 2009, 09:38 PM
I really like this, it's so true what you wrote.
Good write.
xXx
releasing
Written Jul 26 2009, 09:16 PM
beautiful poem :) i could feel the poem as i was reading it. i love it!
stargazer93
Written Jul 26 2009, 04:53 PM
First of all good title and I love love love this poem!! it's like when you look through all the pictures you can see someones life and all the things that happened the good and the bad and even the ppl you wish you didn't meet. Faved!!
disgruntledmoth
Interesting. It's a little like you've taken moments out of time and expanded and reiterated them for paper. I think this poem was a little too long to have an especially strong impact, but the moments you describe are fairly universal; everyone has experienced a moment, a memory like this.