anon_amarth

An Injury to one, is an Injury to All

Nothing on this planet is stronger than the human race when the title holds true.

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 Willow

bittersweet

Written Aug 02 2009, 10:16 PM

I quite enjoyed the imagery in this piece
-smiles- pale girls for the win.

 James

nathan_nonsense

Written Aug 01 2009, 07:52 PM

i liked this a lot. very jittery and confused, which is something i really like in poetry. i liked the line about her white legs. pale girls are more attractive to me. nice write though!