Loving you
Um I think this is a horrible poem but Ive been annoyed to post it by my friends...comment if youd like Id love to hear what you have to say...
Um I think this is a horrible poem but Ive been annoyed to post it by my friends...comment if youd like Id love to hear what you have to say...
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Sometimes love can be difficult
Especially when you give your heart away,
And the person you give it too doesn't appreciate it.
I only spotted one issue, the "your" in the last line should be "you're"
Other than that, I enjoyed it. It was.... short but sweet.
crimson76
Personally I adore this. It’s a very personal feeling for many people. I especially liked the end from “At times we are at war” clear to “Your my everything...” and the line about “I love you no matter what you do” is one that I personally have much empathy for.