peacelovenstace

Dissolving Right Before My Eyes

by peacelovenstace, Oct 09 2009, 05:57 PM in love, eyes, dissolving, fading,

a girl that loses the image of someone slowly in her head. *lines in this poem are actual things that a guy that meant a lot to me once said. remember...things change.

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Willow

bittersweet

Written Oct 09 2009, 07:33 PM

Great last line, it really brought the whole piece to a very final sounding conclusion.
Memories and people always fade away, and things do change, but just becuase you cannot recal the face or the voice of a person clearly doesn't mean you've forgotten them.

-B