chicory

And in these tepid hours that pass on by

by chicory, Nov 25 2009, 11:06 PM in dreams, loss, love, sea, time, ships, clocks,

I have a feeling that several of my pieces are flowing together in some sort of schizophrenic mash-up of ideas. But there isn't a "starter" piece yet, and definitely no "end'er". What do you guys think? Or am I just imagining things...

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witch_doctor_sakajawea

Written Dec 11 2009, 02:17 AM

I like how this poem is the progression of a night. A night full of emotions and thoughts. Its wuite powrful with some of your words, like scar.

Very strong.

Scheel

naomilinn

Written Nov 28 2009, 10:43 AM

this was beautiful^-^
i loved it soo.

James

nathan_nonsense

Written Nov 26 2009, 08:10 AM

it was kinda mashed up, but it's amazing. i loved the wording. very professional.