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naomilinn
Written Jan 01 2010, 04:07 PM
Well this was absolutely great :)
I love the title, and the poem was just awesome.
ordinary_girl
Written Dec 31 2009, 09:45 AM
holy crap this is awesome! keep writing, i think this is one of my favourites i've read on this site xx
bittersweet
YES. FINALLY. SOMEONE WHO KNOWS HOW TO USE A RHYME SCHEME.
Sorry, that made me really happy. The rhyming was natural and it flowed and it never seemed forced.
Good job
-B