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melodicengross
Written Feb 22 2010, 09:41 PM
I luuuuV it.!
But pleaz don't hurt no one else.its naked truth of feelings and the love you have for your sanity.!!!Applause!!!
robinwollff
Written Feb 22 2010, 03:41 PM
This is a very strong piece. But,
You use excellent language, and then on the other hand you make small spelling and Grammar mistakes that take away from the effect, and confuse the meaning.... I think the work itself is very powerful - your statement is clear, you took a direction and brought it home in the end. I would not have chosen to include the dedication in the poem itself - but it worked. Impressive.
naomilinn
I thought this was amazing. I really didn't notice too many spelling mistakes, and so what;you still got your point across. Great :D