bradkin

NOW

This is the first poem I've written in a long time. It's an old idea really, but one that I've been thinking about. I'm just gonna wing it -- no editing -- not too much thought -- so take it easy on me. :)

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rae11

Written Mar 11, 02:04 PM

really enjoyed this. was inspiring cause i'm not one to live with regrets and at times people and things try to hold me back from that.

 Kindelberger

bradkin

Written Mar 11, 02:00 PM

Thank you for the kind words. :)

 Ercole

robinwollff

Written Mar 11, 12:06 AM

BRAVO, BRAVO, BRAVO AND BRAVO!!!!! Probably the best I've read on this site or in general in a long time... you took an idea, developed it from start to end; beautiful form and usage of language.
BRAVO!

 Ghost

syntax350

Written Mar 07, 11:03 PM

I really liked this one. Kudos to you mister!