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bradkin
Written Mar 08 2010, 11:56 PM
Loved it. I don't like to use "poetry terms", but the phrase that makes the most sense it this case is that it resonated with me. There were two lines, perhaps you'll know which ones, that I didn't connect with. But that's whats great about poetry. Those may be the two lines that blow someone elses hair back. Good job. :)
robinwollff
I like. Suggestion for a title - "Reflective Observation", or perhaps - "Subjective Observation"? Clever little piece. I liked.