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What do you do?

another one of my works not the best

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naomilinn

Written Mar 15 2010, 08:25 PM

"What do you do?
When you’re thrown to the ground
Treated like dirt, without worth
And no one to pick you up"

That was my favorite part. This reminds of the song "welcome to my life" by simple plan.
This was good :D

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syntax350

Written Mar 13 2010, 03:51 AM

Awww :( you is going through though time? I gives you Jolly Ranchers to make you a happy again, no? :D

THIS POEM WAS MUY BUENO! Bravo to you mister!