rae11

Reflection

i think this is one of my better ones still needs some work tho

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brokenhearts102

Written Mar 17 2010, 06:39 PM

i like it. i like the way you describe the emotions and your word choice is great. your right it needs a little work here and there but not much so just edit it a little and i assure you it will be fantastic.

 Ercole

robinwollff

Written Mar 11 2010, 12:03 AM

Honesty in the most naked form... precious. Love it.