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poetandiknowit
Written Apr 03 2010, 11:10 PM
I'd have put something like:
"and maybe if you open your eyes
Then you can finally see
That I need to apologise
'Cause you mean too much to me"
But I like what you've got :)
chiyan
"Flow,flow through depths sweetest reap
By shadows left,the darkest being
Mend those bitterest scars adeep
by promise unbroken,by heaven's wing"
-it's nice but try this
and hope it touches the heart to whom it was addressed to..