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this one sucks badly

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crimsonwine

Written Jun 04 2010, 05:39 AM

ugh. a very passionate way to let others know you're suicidal. you are still alive though. that poem was nice.. as mentioned. very passionate. :))

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chiyan

Written Jun 04 2010, 05:33 AM

"I am the cold in the dark

The wind from the past

The Blackness in the sorrow"

-this are my favorite lines....and this poem does not sucks,believe me