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interesting concept/idea, but the poem felt just like the title - hollow. try to put more emotion (? or maybe just more description) into the piece, it might have more impact on the reader than the current vague lines.
this is good
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interesting concept/idea, but the poem felt just like the title - hollow. try to put more emotion (? or maybe just more description) into the piece, it might have more impact on the reader than the current vague lines.