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naomilinn
Written Jun 18 2010, 10:40 PM
Thank you for the comment!
I liked the first part the most, but i loved the whole thing :D amazing.
^-^
talkalot9021
Written Jun 18 2010, 10:24 AM
"I’m all arms and fingers and hands
With angles that don’t make sense to the ruler," that line's amazing.
i really like this, it kinda makes you think a lot about what the human mind goes through when you're depressed and whatnot. i also like how this has like some sort of mystery to it, and then the ending is like *BAM*.
bestoflast
Written Jun 18 2010, 06:07 AM
I can relate to this in several ways,the words have a bueatifull flow and an incredible deep meaning very well written ^_^
frezbo
Hi there Erika, it's been quite a while!
This is an amazing poem, some fantastic lines in here (they made me realise how much I've been missing from Deliric!). Hope you're alright, I can see your poetry is as good as ever :)