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Dark, dirty and gross. Great since of darkness, pain and decay. But I won't lie to you, it didn't read very consistently. Your rhyme scheme felt really forced and awkward but the general rhythm wasn't too bad. -Chicory
chicory
Dark, dirty and gross. Great since of darkness, pain and decay. But I won't lie to you, it didn't read very consistently. Your rhyme scheme felt really forced and awkward but the general rhythm wasn't too bad.
-Chicory