A love to beautiful to last
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I'd make the last paragrah "And let tomorrow never come" because come matches the word sun at the end making it ryhme better. ANyways I loved this poem and thought the first paragraph was the best of all of them :) Rock on!
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I'd make the last paragrah "And let tomorrow never come" because come matches the word sun at the end making it ryhme better. ANyways I loved this poem and thought the first paragraph was the best of all of them :) Rock on!