sojourner

A soul Laid Bare

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witch_doctor_sakajawea

Written Jul 30 2010, 05:34 AM

It's interesting how this poem is almost a mixture of life and death. The hurt and feelings of death with the water as life and hopes things will improve.

 armstrong

wolf-girl

Written Jul 27 2010, 07:48 PM

aww thats so true. it helps if someone is there to listen

 Hollaway

malu94

Written Jul 27 2010, 12:48 PM

this was amazing...it flowed awesome...i dont even have the right words just wow :)