State of Unstated.
Please don't say any thing too mean like I love comment really I do but I really like this poem so I'd perfer comments that could help me improve my writing in it anyways comment and i hope you like it!!!
Please don't say any thing too mean like I love comment really I do but I really like this poem so I'd perfer comments that could help me improve my writing in it anyways comment and i hope you like it!!!
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Good show. Well engineered and has a good flow to it in my opinion. Keep on writing!
Your poem is well written and best of all it comes from your heart,sometimes being young is very hard,.
this is really great.
it makes me think of all the possible things that it could mean. at one point i think rape (hah) but at other points i think it means something greater than just trying to get over something that happened.
this was really well written
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Erin I've said this before, but this beats them all. This is probably your best piece of writing and one of the best I've ever read. It's funny though that I do it too, where the ones I say I don't think are good turn out to be better ones. Well I don't even know what else to say erin. Except that you should be really proud of yourself and this poem.Wow. OMG. Erin!!!!!!