erinheartspoems

Infinative Play

by erinheartspoems, Aug 20 2010, 08:42 PM

Not sure my thoughts on this bcuz I like parts of it but also parts are pretty bad if ya kno wat I mean! Comment please please please!

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miki_luvs_poetry

Written Sep 09 2010, 07:47 PM

ERIN! THIS MAY HAVE ALMOST REACHED THE LEVEL OF THE UNSTATED ONE WHICH I SAID WAS MY FAVORITE! YOU MAY NOTICE THIS IS IN ALL CAPS. ITS BECAUSE THIS ONE AND THE UNSTATED ONE BLEW ME AWAY. MY 2 NEW FAV PIECES OF POETRY. EVER. EEEVVVEEERRR. YOU'VE GROWN SO MUCH GURLY! UR AMAZINGLY AMAZING!!!!

alexander

juno

Written Aug 21 2010, 09:52 PM

hey...

i'm not sure what i Really feel, but it is definitely solid. Keep Writing!!!

Campbell

chicory

Written Aug 21 2010, 01:07 AM

Actually, I thought it was quite nice, minus a few flawed words like "excape"... I'm a Nazi about spelling and grammar... I believe you meant "escape". :)

Excellent emotional content though.

-Chicory