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miki_luvs_poetry
Written Sep 09 2010, 07:53 PM
Amazing. Yep. Not your best but amazing. The only flaw was that im not sure that the marrying thng tied in. Most of it was uk like amazing but there was a line or 2 that seemed to just be thrown in, but still luv it and most of it wuz rly good
miki_luvs_poetry
P.s. We'll walk the road of life hand in hand, and leave our footprints in the sand is my fav line and a good idea 4 a new poem. Maybe ill steal it watch out :P