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These are the most recent submissions tagged with “Twill.”.
Cuckoo Bananas
This is a song I made for my daycare kids, just today Evan told me it was his favorite song in the "luniverse". This is strictly cute, nothing less nothing more.
All Wrong.
This is me trying to push through writers block. Not a real experience, just about how love can be one-sided.
Where You Belong.
I was going through my old posts and found a bunch of my old poems that had no feedback, so I am posting those few hoping for feedback.
On The Couch.
Small changes, would appreciate criticism. Meant to be performed, but has a nice effect on paper as well.
Drag up Headstand
Final poem for my class so it has to be good. I don't think it is quite there yet, suggestions?
I Prefer the Cold.
My final draft of this poem. Please let me know what you think, this may just be my favorite thing that I have written.
Doggie Day Care
A revision I had to make for class to my poem Lazy Days In Plastic Play Grass. I think I actually like the revision better. Let me know what you think of it!
Always Late.
Repost! I didn't get the feedback I was hoping for, actually I didn't get any...comments are greatly appreciated. It is about a friend that is more like a brother to me. It is not as good as I would like it to be, so please help me out!
I am a Mother.
This is my attempt at a sestina. Let me know if it works. No, I technically don't have kids, but I might as well.
National Day of Silence.
Kind of a more recent poem, I would like to see what everyone thinks it means.
Always Late.
I just finished this one....It isn't very good....needs a lot of work so I need some good feedback! It's about a "friend", who is more like a brother.
You Gave Him Your Heart and What Has he Given You?
For a formerly good friend, now I can't stand her...but an alright poem.