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These are the most recent submissions tagged with “Time”.
Never Alone
Tonight I got the strange urge to write poetry. Something I have never done before. I like it for a starter. Can anyone give me any feedback on it?
20 Minutes Ago
how often have you counted the exact moments since you last saw someone you loved? too many times, right? this is like that, only with an awesome twist at the end
Time
dahhh. nothing good comes out of my hands anymore. i wrote this on the spot, and it's not that great. GIVE ME FEEDBACK CAUSE I WANNA KNOW WHAT I CAN FIX. kthx ;D
State of Unstated.
Please don't say any thing too mean like I love comment really I do but I really like this poem so I'd perfer comments that could help me improve my writing in it anyways comment and i hope you like it!!!
Summer Night
A poem I wrote about my life this summer. I played games and surfed the web extensively.
Sometimes I Fall Out of the Sky
time is a relative term; depends on from where you are watching it go by
Time
my first poem. it's free verse. written in january of 2009 and i'm still giving it minor changes now.
Death to the Sun
Just a short something on my mind. Not sure if it's truly finished, but it seems satisfied for the time being.
A Hundred Thousand
i think i might like the idea behind this poem more then the actual writing itself :D what do you think?
J.T.'s Poem
Knowing you when we were young. Seeing you everyday, so used to you near. But now your gone away from here. I still think your there, but your gone. Forever missed. Forever on. I know your gone can't bring you back. You were the jokester, the clown. I will always remeber that. My long friend and crush. Your alive within me in trust. ~ kirstyn
And in these tepid hours that pass on by
I have a feeling that several of my pieces are flowing together in some sort of schizophrenic mash-up of ideas. But there isn't a "starter" piece yet, and definitely no "end'er". What do you guys think? Or am I just imagining things...
